Comments on: Intruder Alert http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/ Web Series Dudes Tue, 31 Jan 2012 05:37:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Mky93 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15449 Mky93 Sat, 23 May 2009 13:03:49 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15449 samase2.. sry.. xD My english is not that good. Im portuguese.. :) samase2.. sry.. xD
My english is not that good.
Im portuguese.. :)

]]> By: Willt41 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15405 Willt41 Wed, 20 May 2009 16:41:26 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15405 Wow fantastic episode guys, that last scene was very well shot and scored the fast paced beat worked well with the quick changing camera shots, you guys have come into your own as users of machinama to tell a story the jokes are still good but the story is continuing to excel its self in the forms of pacing and drama I certainly look forward to how this works out. also at homer1492 i agree it is rude to criticise some body's artistic integrate when you have not seen the whole picture yet, as it is much like the blind men and the elephant ( http://www.noogenesis.com/pineapple/blind_men_elephant.html ) Wow fantastic episode guys, that last scene was very well shot and scored the fast paced beat worked well with the quick changing camera shots, you guys have come into your own as users of machinama to tell a story the jokes are still good but the story is continuing to excel its self in the forms of pacing and drama I certainly look forward to how this works out.

also at homer1492 i agree it is rude to criticise some body’s artistic integrate when you have not seen the whole picture yet, as it is much like the blind men and the elephant ( http://www.noogenesis.com/pineapple/blind_men_elephant.html )

]]> By: samase2 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15383 samase2 Mon, 18 May 2009 13:54:34 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15383 Good episode !! Huge waits for the next one. BTW...Mky93...it's "dead" not "death"... only as an anouncment.... I hope that Player will survive to the end and Asher would not be always bad. Best of player this far: Player: (@¿@) Good episode !! Huge waits for the next one.
BTW…Mky93…it’s “dead” not “death”…
only as an anouncment….

I hope that Player will survive to the end and Asher would not be always bad.

Best of player this far: Player: (@¿@)

]]> By: UnKnoWn PlaYeR http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15375 UnKnoWn PlaYeR Sun, 17 May 2009 10:44:58 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15375 Think of it guys, Its really probable. Think of it guys, Its really probable.

]]> By: UnKnoWn PlaYeR http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15374 UnKnoWn PlaYeR Sun, 17 May 2009 10:44:05 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15374 i think cortez will actually die. I mean, since lerrory is one of the main characters, and he already found out the truth, he shouldnt be remove like this. and if asher is just a side character, why did they make a theme for him in the intro music? im sure lerrory will join the t and ahmad might take over the terrorist in cortez place coz cortez is close to ahmad. Im just speculating. Aint sure but its one of the most probable situation. Its also a real interesting story arc if cortez die. All though its sad, i guess it has to happen. another probable thing might happen is ahmad was in the nuclear plant scavenging and so happen to bump into someone. But i'd definitely stick to the guess where cortez die. i was right about the fact that asher is a robot and the comrades aint some sub characters. i think cortez will actually die. I mean, since lerrory is one of the main characters, and he already found out the truth, he shouldnt be remove like this. and if asher is just a side character, why did they make a theme for him in the intro music? im sure lerrory will join the t and ahmad might take over the terrorist in cortez place coz cortez is close to ahmad. Im just speculating. Aint sure but its one of the most probable situation. Its also a real interesting story arc if cortez die. All though its sad, i guess it has to happen. another probable thing might happen is ahmad was in the nuclear plant scavenging and so happen to bump into someone.

But i’d definitely stick to the guess where cortez die. i was right about the fact that asher is a robot and the comrades aint some sub characters.

]]> By: AssistanceStudios http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15372 AssistanceStudios Sun, 17 May 2009 04:05:01 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15372 For about a second, I thought that Asher was Mendoza. ctually that would have been really cool... Asher is Mendoza is robot form...But I already knew something was up with Asher from the beginning. "Oh and says hello." Thats one of the guys from the other terrorists, you know, "VODKA DRINKS YOU"? What I think? All the new terrorists are cyborgs and Asher.(Obviously) As for Wolf, we have no idea what the hell he is yet. We know he is not the REAL Wolf, but we don' know for sure he is a cyborg. Where does the scientist stad in all of this? Helping player or the Producer? Lots and lots of question. Good job planning this out. There wasn't really a big fight in this one like I expected, but it's probably moved to the next episode. Looking forward to it, and good job. For about a second, I thought that Asher was Mendoza.
ctually that would have been really cool…
Asher is Mendoza is robot form…But I already knew something was up with Asher from the beginning.
“Oh and says hello.” Thats one of the guys from the other terrorists, you know, “VODKA DRINKS YOU”?
What I think? All the new terrorists are cyborgs and Asher.(Obviously) As for Wolf, we have no idea what the hell he is yet. We know he is not the REAL Wolf, but we don’ know for sure he is a cyborg. Where does the scientist stad in all of this? Helping player or the Producer?
Lots and lots of question. Good job planning this out. There wasn’t really a big fight in this one like I expected, but it’s probably moved to the next episode.
Looking forward to it, and good job.

]]> By: danielign9 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-2/#comment-15371 danielign9 Sun, 17 May 2009 03:57:03 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15371 TONS OF CLIFFHANGERS HERE. Wonder if this plot can actually fit in a couple more episodes with all these cliffhangers. TONS OF CLIFFHANGERS HERE. Wonder if this plot can actually fit in a couple more episodes with all these cliffhangers.

]]> By: danielign9 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-1/#comment-15369 danielign9 Sun, 17 May 2009 03:50:18 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15369 Ok, here's my conclusion: -Asher is double agent, w/ the comrade's alliance(the Ochos Muertos?) and Wolf Corp. -Leeroy has now, by this point, hacked Wolf Corp. computers which has (?) evrythng about Noonien -Asher's objectives are to end Leeroy and Cortez's joint operation -Montrose quiet lately-expect somthng major from him nxt episodes -Player is going to be either assasinated or reformated (smehow) by Asher -Ahmad turning nerd and deeply in Leeroy-Cortez joint op. -Westy turning sane -Ellis and Chet are the only norms Ok, here’s my conclusion:
-Asher is double agent, w/ the comrade’s alliance(the Ochos Muertos?) and Wolf Corp.
-Leeroy has now, by this point, hacked Wolf Corp. computers which has (?) evrythng about Noonien
-Asher’s objectives are to end Leeroy and Cortez’s joint operation
-Montrose quiet lately-expect somthng major from him nxt episodes
-Player is going to be either assasinated or reformated (smehow) by Asher
-Ahmad turning nerd and deeply in Leeroy-Cortez joint op.
-Westy turning sane
-Ellis and Chet are the only norms

]]> By: angeloftheafterlife http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-1/#comment-15367 angeloftheafterlife Sun, 17 May 2009 00:59:09 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15367 OMGWTFBBQ!! that was awsome! exreme clifhanger tho... loved the producers reaction to asher saying that "andraesays hi" (sorry about spelling) XD only one thing i found a bit off... maybe this is just my computer, but the music for when the teams were deciding how they were going to choose who was going, there was one note that kept getting extremely loud and annoying... maybe it's just me... OMGWTFBBQ!! that was awsome! exreme clifhanger tho… loved the producers reaction to asher saying that “andraesays hi” (sorry about spelling) XD

only one thing i found a bit off… maybe this is just my computer, but the music for when the teams were deciding how they were going to choose who was going, there was one note that kept getting extremely loud and annoying… maybe it’s just me…

]]> By: Crossu88 http://smoothfewfilms.com/2009/05/15/intruder-alert/comment-page-1/#comment-15365 Crossu88 Sat, 16 May 2009 23:07:52 +0000 http://smoothfewfilms.com/?p=1824#comment-15365 seems that asher is going to test cortez's "badass" seems that asher is going to test cortez’s “badass”

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